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Her. In Detail

I came to on a slightly cold, immediately unfamiliar floor. A movement more sensed than seen, drew my eye upward. And there she stood, straddled across my prone form: the fullness of woman personified. The warm white of her skin contrasted sharply to the total black of the plain knicker and bra set that caressed her form and left my mouth watering.

Pale feet decorated with long, slim toes topped with slightly bulbous tips led to prominently sculptured ankles. The legs that extended upward were dusted with dark honey freckles and golden short hairs; whilst knees blushed rosily. The generously rounded thighs led inward and upward in an invitation that made me regret my momentary incapacity.

My eyes took the extended tour to reach her face, but arrived to be met with a soft oval visage that seemed to hold a constant flush across nose and cheeks whilst more freckles danced playfully across them. Above almond shaped eyes adorned with hazel pupils and long lashes, two gracefully arched eyebrows sat proudly: full, un-tweezered and acting as the underscore to the bold reddish-brown waves of hair that framed her face in a manner that could only be described as ‘elfin’. And when she smiled, her face radiated with pleasure: unveiling a soft dimple at the left corner of her mouth and pulling the previously unnoticed button nose into prominence

A seizure reminded me that this was just a brief respite and as oblivion called me to return, my last thought left me laughing at myself: I so underestimated you.

This piece was written and submitted as part of’s Weekly Writing Challenge. The writing challenges are designed to “help you to push your writing boundaries, show off your blogging chops, and, hopefully, spark more post ideas”. The posts should be specifically written in response to the challenge set.

This week’s challenge was to “practice your powers of observation. Take any person, place, or event, and write three paragraphs describing your subject in great detail”. You can see how other bloggers responded to the challenge, on the Devil is in the Details.

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