You have taught me the truest
understanding of friendship by
acting it out every day of ten years.
You have shown kindness without limit;
tenderness without measure;
faith without question;
and a delight in life that inspires greatness in others.
How then, could I not love You?
You, who have given all.
You, who have upheld others so they could find their glory.
You, who were never afraid of the person I was trying to become.
Know this Gürşen Houssein:
I loved you before I knew you, and
I will love you for all eternity.
You are my beloved:
and ever will I be glad to have known you,
and to call you ‘friend’.
Dedicated to: Gus – playmate, companion, beloved.
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Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.
Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.
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AUTHOR: I am might war. I have a love of music, the written word, travel, Anime, polar bears, people and “sticking and colouring”.