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Chocolate Soup

You are a smile that brings warmth to my
bones and beauty to my spirit;
a presence that nourishes and laughter
that comforts.

You are a sweet left on my pillow and a
gesture that welcomes;
the taste of fresh baked hard dough bread
and the beginning of the dance.

You are a whisper telling stories and a
playmate come to call;
a pattern that traces delight and a
thought leaving wonder in my mouth.

You are an adventure, a song and
jumping in puddles;
a passion that challenges and joy
treading the face of the earth.
Dedicated to: Mike Beckford – who in thought is a delight and in presence, a blessing.

SO TELL ME: What do you think of this piece?

  • Did it engage you?
  • Does the meaning come across? Are there any images or lines you don’t understand or find unclear?
  • Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar?
  • Do you have any suggestions for revision?

Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.

Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.

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AUTHOR: I am might war. I have a love of music, the written word, travel, Anime, polar bears, people and “sticking and colouring”.

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