A crayon and a piece of paper.
A moment of stillness and a wealth of opportunity.
But what message to be emblazoned across this untouched landscape?
What theme to be scribbled and then smoothed into easy words?
What revelation to be rhymed and measured to fit?
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Our deepest love: realised in our
lifetime and made beautiful by
our own hands.
SO TELL ME: What do you think of this piece?
- Did it engage you?
- Does the meaning come across? Are there any images or lines you don’t understand or find unclear?
- Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar?
- Do you have any suggestions for revision?
Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.
Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.
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AUTHOR: I am might war. I have a love of music, the written word, travel, Anime, polar bears, people and “sticking and colouring”.