Photo courtesy of Michelle Weber.
Those hands are my downfall. Those large hands scored with multiple burns and cuts; with their clever, nimble fingers and constant redness from being frequently washed in too-hot water.
God, I could watch those hands for hours as they go about their business. Have watched them over these past three years; but these last few months, they’ve been driving me crazy. I lose time watching those hands.
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I came to on a slightly cold, immediately unfamiliar floor. A movement more sensed than seen, drew my eye upward. And there she stood, straddled across my prone form: the fullness of woman personified. The warm white of her skin contrasted sharply to the total black of the plain knicker and bra set that caressed her form and left my mouth watering.
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If I came up behind you;
tapped you on the shoulder;
and asked you to love me …
SO TELL ME: What do you think of this piece?
- Did it engage you?
- Does the meaning come across? Are there any images or lines you don’t understand or find unclear?
- Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar?
- Do you have any suggestions for revision?
Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.
Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.
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AUTHOR: I am might war. I have a love of music, the written word, travel, Anime, polar bears, people and “sticking and colouring”.