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Inside I’m Dancing

There are parts of ourselves that are so well known to us, that they become an essential part of defining who we are and how we feel about our person.

My body … my physical self, is that to me.

– might war (Extract taken from ‘Muffled‘)

 
That is why this illness has had such a great impact on my sense of well-being.
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The Invalid’s Answering Machine

Hello, you are through to might war’s answering machine. Please leave your name and a short message after the tone and I will get back to you as soon as I can.

         But before you do so, please note that it is very likely that I shall be hearing this message several days after it has been left. Narcotic fogs cloud the passage of time and I am unable to determine good days and bad days until I am in one.

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Nightmare Scenario

Sometimes the words come a-spilling:
tripping over themselves as they
empty out of my mouth.
And it is imperative that I
voice them:
else I would choke
and my thoughts, my curses my insecurities all,
they would drown me.
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Hidden Messages

People talk … and talk:
and the words can hide or tell you things.
And sometimes, if you shut your eyes,
you can see what they are trying
to tell you beneath the words.
 

 
 
SO TELL ME: What do you think of this piece?

  • Did it engage you?
  • Does the meaning come across? Are there any images or lines you don’t understand or find unclear?
  • Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar?
  • Do you have any suggestions for revision?

Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.

Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.
 
 

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AUTHOR: I am might war. I have a love of music, the written word, travel, Anime, polar bears, people and “sticking and colouring”.