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Awakening

Awakening poem; Copyright © 2013 www.mightwar.com
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  • Did it engage you?
  • Does the meaning come across? Are there any images or lines you don’t understand or find unclear?
  • Are there obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar?
  • Do you have any suggestions for revision?

Please be brutally honest in your assessments – good, bad or indifferent.
I don’t scare easily; and I really do want to hear what YOU have to say about my work.

Many thanks in advance for your time and your criticism.
 
 

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Her. In Detail

I came to on a slightly cold, immediately unfamiliar floor. A movement more sensed than seen, drew my eye upward. And there she stood, straddled across my prone form: the fullness of woman personified. The warm white of her skin contrasted sharply to the total black of the plain knicker and bra set that caressed her form and left my mouth watering.
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